October Peak
by Joanne Faries
by Joanne Faries
dedicated to my husband, Ray
Muscles twitch
anticipate
eyes dart
narrow focus
follow the ball
adjustments made
perceptible shift
hunch forward
lean back
hushed whisper
inhale, exhale
fingers clench, relax
ignore cheers
stretch
senses heighten
ready, ready, wait
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in the zone, he weaves
blocks commercials
juggles remote
answers phone
trained all summer
he’s peaked
it’s October
Pro football, World Series,
hockey, basketball, golf
NASCAR
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Note - as this time Ice hockey is on hold due to lockout - but he's poised for any return
Great poem. Makes one realize how superflous extra words are.
ReplyDeleteHa! It sounds like your man likes to watch sports.
ReplyDeleteFunny!
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Great rhythm!
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