Friday, April 22, 2016

A to Z Challenge - Sojourn

Sojourn

soldier on he says
solemn in his faith
her soul is struck by Neil Diamond’s
Song Sung Blues
they separate

she staggers, he stomps
stalemate
synchronicity simplicity
she salivates for his love
he seeks salvation

both quench a


thirst
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14 comments:

  1. Mason CanyonApril 22, 2016 at 6:37 AM

    Great post.

    Mason
    Alex's Ninja Minion

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  2. Stephanie FarisApril 22, 2016 at 7:26 AM

    Great job! And sojourn is a word I've never really used in a complete sentence.

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  3. Pat HattApril 22, 2016 at 9:42 AM

    Both searching and find, two of a kind

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  4. Al PenwasserApril 22, 2016 at 10:12 AM

    Now that song will be in my head all day.

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  5. Al PenwasserApril 22, 2016 at 10:12 AM

    Now that song will be in my head all day.

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  6. ConnieApril 22, 2016 at 11:04 AM

    Ah, I love the ending. Have a good weekend. :)

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  7. UnknownApril 22, 2016 at 11:24 AM

    That was really beautiful. It conjures lovely images.

    @Kathleen01930
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    1. JoanneApril 22, 2016 at 12:09 PM

      Not many more letters to go Silent glide through the alphabet

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  8. Annalisa CrawfordApril 22, 2016 at 12:46 PM

    Everyone's commented on the song, but I don't know it, so I'll have to go and further my musical education :-) Love all the Ss in this one.

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    1. JoanneApril 22, 2016 at 5:41 PM

      Back in the day Neil was hot. Lots of classic songs. Also check Sweet Caroline. Enjoy

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